雅思写作9分范文:关于青少年做无偿社区工作

2017-02-10 15:54 作者:admin

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  题目:

  Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole.

  Do you agree or disagree?

  中文翻译:

  有些人认为所有青少年都应该在自由时间做无偿工作来帮助当地社区。 他们认为这将有利于个人青少年和整个社会。

  你同意还是不同意?

  范文:

  Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.

  Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.

  At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.

  In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.

  (250 words, band 9)

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